Celestial Review...
Site: Celestial
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The first thing I noticed about your layout was the stars which look really cute. The colours look well together and it looks inviting. Since it doesn’t feature a celebrity it stands out a bit more. Even though I like it, it doesn't blow me away. In future layouts maybe add more effects? The freewebs ad overlaps on the layout in IE. I like that your site looks good in both IE and FF. Have you ever thought of applying for hosting? I'm sure many people will want to host your site.
I enjoyed reading your blog. It was interesting and I even learned a few things.
On the “About” page why do you have Opened: Not yet!? On your link back page, one of your buttons show up multiple times. I like the fact that you've written your reads. This page is neat and organized; there are just these really minor errors.
Its a lot of reading but they are interesting and witty. I liked reading your "About me" page. There are a lot of songs on the music page, try organizing it better. It looks jumbled and just a sea of words. Your "Right now" page is blank. What is the point of having it if it features nothing? You should add something on it. Everything else is good though.
There's not much content here. The reads are good. You should add more articles. The games are fun and I liked playing them, especially Bug on a Wire. I suggest you add topics in which visitors can post their opinion. You'll be providing interactive activities so they won't get bored.
Why not feature "Your opinion" in the visitor section? It is for them. Add some more topics; things of interest and those that are controversial. People love expressing their thoughts and feelings towards something. You've got competitions which is good so people can do more on your site.
Your site is average, there’s nothing really special about it. However I enjoyed reading your articles. There are just certain things that need fixing. You can definitely improve the site by making some changes.
